People shouldn't be comfortable reading this poem. It is a poem one should keep coming back to so am quite glad to see your comment. If you had to keep coming maybe two or three times, that is nothing but a good thing. If I split into parts, I think that would take the weight of the poem. Especially for White readers, where changing the format would simply play into their pallet (buying into White fragility). Thanks very much for reading and yes, pictures is always difficult. Not sure what always fits.